(a) The girls were excited as they waited for the results.
The moment was here. After months of waiting for this day, it has finally arrived. The girls in the room were holding their breath. Beats of sweat trickled down their foreheads as they waited nervously. Nervous thoughts crept into their vulnerable minds every minute. The moment of truth will be unfolded before their very eyes soon. Hearts pumping faster as the Principle went on stage. All eyes were glued to him as he adjusted the microphone.
(e) She sat heart-broken on her bed.
Crunching her fists, she wept heavily on her bed. Her eyes were full of tears, blocking her vision. Her fragile heart could not take the blow that too shocking. She never thought it would turn out this way. Yet again, she took another look at her result slip, and broke down. Tears just kept on rolling down her cheeks. All she hoped for was that this was all a dream. The word “why” constantly appear in her mind.
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Good effort. I especially like the first one with the short, sharp beginning sentence.
Remember it's principAL.
Hey,I have to say I'm impressed with the second one. Makes me feel like I'm the one you're talking about...Haha. Great job!
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